Turning into a pretty interesting abstraction! I'm not convinced with the left irregular edge into white... compositionally it's a little awkward, but I'm sure you could make it work if you keep pushing it. Try asking yourself what the composition needs to feel balanced yet asymetrical. Also, the top portion with the plants still feels "pasted" together.... it lacks the mystery of "process" that the lower half achieves. Keep working on that and keep pushing the areas of detail. In this work especially, composition will be determined large by areas of detail as contrasted to areas on broader movement.
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Turning into a pretty interesting abstraction! I'm not convinced with the left irregular edge into white... compositionally it's a little awkward, but I'm sure you could make it work if you keep pushing it. Try asking yourself what the composition needs to feel balanced yet asymetrical. Also, the top portion with the plants still feels "pasted" together.... it lacks the mystery of "process" that the lower half achieves. Keep working on that and keep pushing the areas of detail. In this work especially, composition will be determined large by areas of detail as contrasted to areas on broader movement.
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