I really love your use of subtle red and blues and also the diagonal lines in the background really give the piece motion. I feel the figure may be slightly too large but i do like how the diagonal lines come to her face. I think maybe there are too many branches in the upper right corner. I'd like to see how it looks without a few of them or maybe even drop the opacity on them a little bit. Overall this is one of my favorite pieces!
I love the detail you have in the fiqure. But the color with the other "blood" is very distracting. I really LOVE the bird on the tree branch but the footprints are really taking away from the bird. Maybe some layer blending might make the bird or the footprints pop better.
I feel like the bottom right corner is the most interesting part of this project. The red bleeding through the page lighter around the bird really draws in my focus. I think the foot prints are taking away from the overall composition. I like another version of your piece where the figure in the top left wasn't so dominating. I like your use of the steel blue background and the tree.
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Klearkoat is Rachel Simpson
I really love your use of subtle red and blues and also the diagonal lines in the background really give the piece motion. I feel the figure may be slightly too large but i do like how the diagonal lines come to her face. I think maybe there are too many branches in the upper right corner. I'd like to see how it looks without a few of them or maybe even drop the opacity on them a little bit. Overall this is one of my favorite pieces!
I love the detail you have in the fiqure. But the color with the other "blood" is very distracting. I really LOVE the bird on the tree branch but the footprints are really taking away from the bird. Maybe some layer blending might make the bird or the footprints pop better.
I feel like the bottom right corner is the most interesting part of this project. The red bleeding through the page lighter around the bird really draws in my focus. I think the foot prints are taking away from the overall composition. I like another version of your piece where the figure in the top left wasn't so dominating. I like your use of the steel blue background and the tree.
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